Today I submitted my first script draft for Different Perspectives. Although I received some positive feedback I was told that the dialogue that had been written was quite clunky. I was also told that I was far too unnecessarily descriptive when writing out scene actions. These are somethings I found myself agreeing with as I re-read the script. It is clear that I still have quite a way to go to mastering the descriptions, but I'm going to keep trying to improve it so that eventually it should flow a lot better.
Different Perspectives - Episode 1: Draft
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