Major Project - Tutorial (19/02/16)

I had a tutorial with Simon today in regards to my project. I was happy that I was given a lot of really useful feedback to implement into my scriptwriting.

• Only write what the audience can see.  "Show but don’t tell".
• Let the audience discover
• Better flow. 
• Bring atmosphere into your script through descriptive paragraphs.
• Let the dialogue ‘breathe’.
• Tell us more about the characters
• Dialogue still a bit clunky, make it smoother.
• Set the scene better.
• Describe Elliott's job clearer.

Since my last tutorial I have tried to build on the advice that I was given, this week it was much the same although I definitely felt a clearer understanding of where my project is going.