I am currently gearing up to start work on my project which I should start working on this Friday. I recently received feedback for my first draft of my script and decided to start editing it to
any suggestions made by Simon.
Working on my redraft I decided that some changes had to be made if I wanted to give the script a better resolution or twist. I realised it would be much more interesting to change the plot to create conflict between Sid and Tony. To do this i've decided to have the plot still revolve around Sid trying to revive Tony's career but i've changed the reason for his career downfall. Instead of Tony becoming an alcoholic due to his wife's death he will instead have started drinking after he finds out Sid had an affair with his ex-wife. Sid is not aware of this, and berates Tony for his drinking habits not realising he is the reason he started drinking in the first place.
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